Post by Raven on Nov 15, 2004 20:56:40 GMT -5
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A motor cycle roared into the tiny town and a guy dressed in a red jacket and black pants staggered off the motorcycle holding his stomach. "I think...I'm going to barf." He panted. The girl who was driving got off and hefted a coffin onto her shoulder. "Calm down Issac, it's not like I drove that fast." She said grinning. Issac ran a hand through his spkey black hair. "Well I'm glad you didn't hit anyone Tara." Tara brushed a strand of blue black hair out of her eyes and smiled. "Your such a softie just like your Dad." She punched him on the arm and said. "Come on lets go get a hotel room. Plus I've unilatterally decided that your going to buy us lumch." Issac got an impish grin on his face an asked. "Is this like the time that your unilaterally decided I would stop wearinfg red?" Tara groaned. "I was seven years old throw me a friggin bone."
Meanwhile miles away in a cemetary....
"Hurry up Julius we don't have much time." Knives told the old demented man. "Kinives-sama it takes time to ressurect the dead. You know how long it took me to bring back Legato." He said sweat pouring from his brow. He saw the look in Knives' etye and said. "It is alost done though Knives-sama. You said you wish for him to have no free will." Knives smirked. "Yes make him as strong as he was but make him a shell of who he was. It will make it even more painful when we set him on my brother." Julius nodded as Knives turned around. "Julius do not mess this up. If you do you will not live," Knives turned and left leaving Julius alone. "It is almost done." He whispered. But then a figure rushed out of the nearby church shouting. "What are you doing? Get away from there!" Julius was distracted for one moment and in that moment the freewill of the one he was to ressurect exerted itself. Juliua fled and the man who had scared him away walked over to the grave. "What were they doing at your grave old friend?" He asked he was shocked to see the corpse had been dug up and laid on the ground. "What did they do?" He asked. The body just suddenly started to breath. His eyes opened to reveal tell gray orbs. He looked at the man above him and asked. "Vash is that you?" Vash looked at him and said. "Wolfwood what happened? You were dead."
Authors note- Well private mesage me with what you think. Should I continue? Please give me feedback.
A motor cycle roared into the tiny town and a guy dressed in a red jacket and black pants staggered off the motorcycle holding his stomach. "I think...I'm going to barf." He panted. The girl who was driving got off and hefted a coffin onto her shoulder. "Calm down Issac, it's not like I drove that fast." She said grinning. Issac ran a hand through his spkey black hair. "Well I'm glad you didn't hit anyone Tara." Tara brushed a strand of blue black hair out of her eyes and smiled. "Your such a softie just like your Dad." She punched him on the arm and said. "Come on lets go get a hotel room. Plus I've unilatterally decided that your going to buy us lumch." Issac got an impish grin on his face an asked. "Is this like the time that your unilaterally decided I would stop wearinfg red?" Tara groaned. "I was seven years old throw me a friggin bone."
Meanwhile miles away in a cemetary....
"Hurry up Julius we don't have much time." Knives told the old demented man. "Kinives-sama it takes time to ressurect the dead. You know how long it took me to bring back Legato." He said sweat pouring from his brow. He saw the look in Knives' etye and said. "It is alost done though Knives-sama. You said you wish for him to have no free will." Knives smirked. "Yes make him as strong as he was but make him a shell of who he was. It will make it even more painful when we set him on my brother." Julius nodded as Knives turned around. "Julius do not mess this up. If you do you will not live," Knives turned and left leaving Julius alone. "It is almost done." He whispered. But then a figure rushed out of the nearby church shouting. "What are you doing? Get away from there!" Julius was distracted for one moment and in that moment the freewill of the one he was to ressurect exerted itself. Juliua fled and the man who had scared him away walked over to the grave. "What were they doing at your grave old friend?" He asked he was shocked to see the corpse had been dug up and laid on the ground. "What did they do?" He asked. The body just suddenly started to breath. His eyes opened to reveal tell gray orbs. He looked at the man above him and asked. "Vash is that you?" Vash looked at him and said. "Wolfwood what happened? You were dead."
Authors note- Well private mesage me with what you think. Should I continue? Please give me feedback.